(Edited version) Stranger In The Dark 3 votes Featured in Mystery, Thriller genre. 3 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Tuesday 27th of July...

I gave this story into my english teacher for a possible submition piece for my advanced english folio, he gave me a few pointers and the story above is the revised edition. Only minor alterations have been made but please comment on it, any better? Is it worse?

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Saturday 31st of July...

Oh I still love this story, I like the freshly added details, it gives it a little somthing extra. A wonderful story as always. ^_^

001_moment Frantastic said on Sunday 1st of August...

Thank you! I hated going over it and chewing bits out, but i think it was for the best...

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Thursday 5th of August...

You have talent, and I truly enjoy reading your stories. I’m constantly going over my stories and trying to see what needs work.

001_moment Frantastic said on Friday 6th of August...

It's frustrating isn't it? You think you've got it right and then... oh there's something else that could be changed!

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Monday 9th of August...

Indeed! I swear, every time I think I have fixed everything, I go back over something and find something else that needs fixing.

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