A Poem - Fall Expectations - revised 3 votes Featured in Fable, Poem genre. 3 vote up
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Web Web DSC01773 starcitywriter said on Sunday 16th of November...

Pardon my duplicate "slap" as I could not recover my password. Now let us hope I can remember it again ... senior moments! I had trouble with the spacing and no matter what I tried it insisted on double spacing. This is my first poem.

Crimson Fist luke said on Sunday 16th of November...

I like it! Evocative of those days, scarf whipping round your head, when the wind is so unpredictable and comes from every angle. Maybe a little heavy handed on the message (just when you mention wisdom and life; I feel they make it a bit too obvious for the reader), but I like the flow and positivity. Well done!

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