Awake (opening thoughts)
Mystery and Abstract
I woke to find the sky beneath me, as if the world had been turned on its head. I lay suspended by the sight for a moment with the image of myself falling from the face of the earth in a dive towards heaven trapped ricocheting back and forth within my heavy skull.
My head lay hanging over the back of the park bench, clinging to my neck in a struggle with gravity as I clung to the vague remnants of a shattered dream.
good use of nouns. kinda short but ok :)