Forgotten Memories Part 2 2 votes Featured in Fantasy genre. 2 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Monday 31st of October...

I'm glad to see the next part of this! I like the continuation and rounding off of the story, great family ties and I liked how you separated the memory through using italics, gave real focus to the story.I also enjoyed how you concluded it, rather than allowing history to eventually repeat itself, the issue was resolved, a great ending I thought :) well done

Insanity xXxBebba0BxXx said on Monday 31st of October...

Thank you! I'd written a second part before but I thought it didn't explain it very well, so I thought I'd have another go. Took ages, but I finally got round to doing so!

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