Girl at the bus stop - II 2 votes Featured in Romance genre. 2 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Thursday 21st of May...

I really like the way you make the character rifle through every small detail, gives a real sense of their obsession (not sure if that's the right word :S) and strength of feeling towards the girl. Brilliant! :)

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