I Hate You, Violet Pritchard 1 votes Featured in Humour genre. 1 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Thursday 10th of February...

The diffrerent points of view are an interesting technique, in some parts you seem to have used the wrong word but I do that all the time! Too msny ideas too little time eh? Really nice idea though, I look forwards to more of your writing.

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