In the Dark 7 votes Featured in Poem genre. 7 vote up
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Z138767739_thumb lovetowrite said on Tuesday 6th of July...

I wrote this poem for my English poetry unit after our poetry slam. I was unable to participate due to losing my voice but this is what I imagined asking the audience in the auditorium that day. I was dark and everyone was hanging on all of the performer's words.

001_moment Frantastic said on Tuesday 27th of July...

I love the repetition of that line all the way through, gives a real back bone to the whole poem. I think it's great, and the questions give it an almost... authoritive tone? if that makes any sense. i know what i mean!

Prototypesmall weirdfishdf said on Friday 3rd of June...

It's a real shame you didn't get to read this to an audience because it is very good. I lik the constant questioning, great work

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