Loss of Youth Chapter 1 6 votes Featured in Fable genre. 6 vote up
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User calebdc1 said on Sunday 23rd of November...

this is mine by the way i just signed up.

User sbarski said on Sunday 23rd of November...

Are you going to continue the story? You should!!!

Crimson Fist luke said on Monday 24th of November...

I like it! Good use contrast between George realising life passes so quickly and all the little things: asking what's for breakfast and getting in the mail. Agree with sbarski; Continue!!

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