Shhh 6 votes Featured in Horror, Mystery, Thriller genre. 6 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Wednesday 20th of May...

Wow! I couldn't stop reading! You're brilliant. I mean, the sense of danger applied to this piece... amazing. Even without you mentioning it over an dover again, just the way the people act towards the girl when they see her, it gives the idea with amazing strength. And the 'darkness', although you don't actually describe them, they sound terrifying anyway! Seriously jealous of your talent by the way! :)

Madonna2 danica-christine said on Tuesday 26th of May...

This was fantastic! A very good horror; very well written.

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