Stranger In The Dark 6 votes Featured in Mystery, Thriller genre.
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P1000894 (1) Ilia

said on Monday 18th of May...

simply wow... fantastic.

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User MaisieB

said on Tuesday 19th of May...

Wow, this was truly amazing ! Well done :)

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222654 lauren-jade

said on Wednesday 20th of May...

That was really interesting. I don't know how you come up with such sophisticated describing phrases/words but it is great! Very mysterious and chilling, especially towards the end.

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Monday 31st of May...

Very interesting, it’s a good story that leaves one wanting to read more. I could only spot a few errs… Not that I’m one to talk, I can’t spell to save my life… Anyways, good story. Keep up the good work. ^_^

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001_moment Frantastic

said on Sunday 27th of June...

I'm sure the whole thing is riddled with spelling errors, when I start typing some letters are somehow... dropped shall we say? hee hee but thank you! I was beginning to lose hope on discussions on this site, it's nice to have a comment! When my internet is actually going quicker than the pace of a aged snail I'll have to return the favour! I think I have read some of your stuff though, I recognise the name, but again thank you, :D its actually the beginning of chapter 1 in my second book. x

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Sunday 27th of June...

Spelling errors are fixable all you got a do edit, edit, edit. Believe me I know. I have dyslexia so my spelling is horrendous. But I fix what I can when I have the time. I have noticed that people don’t seem to be very active on this site, I am always interested in what people have to say about my work, even if it is negative, it can still be helpful. That is grate that you are working on a novel, I would definitely be interested in such a book.

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001_moment Frantastic

said on Wednesday 30th of June...

Well I'm hoping a publisher somewhere in the world shares such enthusiasm ;) hee hee, yeah I know what you mean about the activity, its not great, I think I've gone months and months - whilst submitting - without a comment, it's a bit disheartening isn't it? Right I'm going to go have a gander at your work now, I love your name, its awesome, I just wrote one down coz I thought I'd be able to alter it afterwards :S whoops!

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Thursday 1st of July...

I am sure there is such a publisher out there, I just like to take care of it my self as best I can, I am told I’m a bit OCD. :P It is definitely disheartening, theses sites are designed to talk about what we all love to do, writing. Wanting to discus our work is only natural. Thank you and I hope you enjoy my work, its all still just rough drafts though. Your name is nice as well, “Dark She Wolf” is the name of a character from one of my storylines.

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001_moment Frantastic

said on Sunday 4th of July...

hey my internet keeps going nuts but i got the chance to have a look at that howl poem you did, i thought it was really good, i'm awful at poetry, i always sound like a five year old. I typed in my actual name for it originally but there was already one on the site apparently, so i had to improvise

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Z138767739_thumb lovetowrite

said on Tuesday 6th of July...

This is really great! Keep up the good work. Maybe you could give me some pointers on my stuff. I can't believe you've already written 7 books! That's amazing!! Keep being optimistic. I'm sure somebody would love to publish your work! ;)

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Thursday 8th of July...

I under stand about your internet, for the last 2 years I haven’t had hardly any internet access, But I am currently staying with my grandparents, and they have internet, and my writing is finally going well again, cuz I can finally do my research properly. (I’m a stickler for the research. :P)

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Thursday 8th of July...

I’m glad you liked “Howl” (incase you haven’t notices I’m a werewolf nut.) But I don’t really like how my poems turn out cuz I can’t rhyme to save my life. >_< But I write what I feel and that is the important part about poetry, feeling. Your name is original and different, its you, that’s all that matters.

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001_moment Frantastic

said on Tuesday 27th of July...

You're into werewolves? Shocker! hee hee i had guessed that actually! Yeah the internet is a bit irritating out here, if you can believe it, I'm actually on dial up! :O i know right? I used to try poems but.. well lets just say they weren't all that great! I love to research, I'm one of these people that watches films, or reads a book and gets really annoyed when things simply dont add up.

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Friday 30th of July...

lol =3 Yeah I guess it is kind of obvious. Dial up sucks that is what I was on before I lost my internet a few years back. Poems are hard, but I write what I want, and if I like what I write I keep it and call it a poem. Oh I know! It bugs me so bad when they don’t have the facts right. When it comes to movies and TV shows the book is always better, but when it comes to writers who don’t have their facts striae it really bugs me.

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001_moment Frantastic

said on Sunday 1st of August...

Yeah coz it just makes me think, if you've taken the time to write it why not research it properly?! laziness is probably the answer! lol

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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Thursday 5th of August...

Exactly! ^^ lol

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