Summoning 2 votes Featured in Fantasy, Horror, Thriller genre. 2 vote up
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Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Thursday 20th of January...

This piece is a bit darker then other peaces I have written.

001_moment Frantastic said on Thursday 20th of January...

I'll say, but its good, it has a sense of reality to it. Though I'm curious as to why the woman did the ceremony anyway? was it that she HAD to or that she WANTED to? It seemed a little unclear to me, but otherwise I thought it was good. A nice launching pad.

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Friday 21st of January...

Perhaps it still needs a bit more work, if that part is unclear; I wanted it to come across that is was something she sought. She wanted a demon born child.

Frances may211948 said on Friday 21st of January...

I agree with the previous comment. The content and floww of the story is very good. However, the ceremony needs clarification.

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