TR1GG3R: Day One 2 votes Featured in Fantasy, Romance genre. 2 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Saturday 29th of January...

I love the start, really draws you into the world the story is set in I think. Also, I think its a nice touch the little bits of speech, not a line wasted. Brilliant!

Demon_wolf Gweynavere said on Tuesday 1st of February...

My best friend tells me that sometimes I use too much dialogue - this is one of the rare pieces that has little in it. Thank you for your words. : 3

001_moment Frantastic said on Wednesday 2nd of February...

your very welcome, I hope to see more of your writing :)

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