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rabsi
i really like the story. The end is pretty sad and you could have been a bit easy with the BOLD... very well written! Rabsi
Sarah
it's quite astonishing to read at how easily this writer has made readers sympathize with the guy in his story. A good piece.
sampathmechie
pretty good story buddy...but it would have been much better if you could have been bit positive i mean something bright could have been brought out....nice piece work..keep writing
sbarski
Good work mate. Keep it up!
Mohkim
Thanks for your feed back folks. @sampathmechie, Oh that's just one of those stories I had written all lost and pessimistic. Just to vent out all negativity in me :-), I will be writing more soon Regards,
lilyb4u2000
a fantastic story.......i dunno why, but i liked the end the best........ do visit my page and lemme know wht u think of my work
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rabsi
said on Thursday 9th of October...i really like the story. The end is pretty sad and you could have been a bit easy with the BOLD... very well written! Rabsi