The Break~ 11 votes Featured in Romance genre. 11 vote up
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User rabsi said on Thursday 9th of October...

i really like the story. The end is pretty sad and you could have been a bit easy with the BOLD... very well written! Rabsi

User rabsi said on Thursday 9th of October...

i really like the story. The end is pretty sad and you could have been a bit easy with the BOLD... very well written! Rabsi

User Sarah said on Thursday 9th of October...

it's quite astonishing to read at how easily this writer has made readers sympathize with the guy in his story. A good piece.

User sampathmechie said on Friday 10th of October...

pretty good story buddy...but it would have been much better if you could have been bit positive i mean something bright could have been brought out....nice piece work..keep writing

User sbarski said on Friday 10th of October...

Good work mate. Keep it up!

User Mohkim said on Friday 10th of October...

Thanks for your feed back folks. @sampathmechie, Oh that's just one of those stories I had written all lost and pessimistic. Just to vent out all negativity in me :-), I will be writing more soon Regards,

Albert Einstein lilyb4u2000 said on Wednesday 5th of November...

a fantastic story.......i dunno why, but i liked the end the best........ do visit my page and lemme know wht u think of my work

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