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Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Wednesday 5th of January...

The other night while trying to sleep, I found that my mind was too full. Too many stray thoughts rushing about. But one struck me, a world with humans, and human like being. As I played with the thought, I saw humans with animal features. Before I knew it a story was forming in my mind, so I decided to write a sample peace. To see what people thought. I’m not certain, but I think I would like to write more.

001_moment Frantastic said on Sunday 9th of January...

write more! Already you have a set up that's got great solidity to it, you can go so many ways with this! You've made the reader want to know about Daegan, and Fawna, then theres the knights, Fawna's family, the background to the main character. So much in so little. Wonderful stuff!

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Monday 17th of January...

I will write more about this world but I need to do a bit more research for it. So it might be a while before I get another short about this world out.

Insanity xXxBebba0BxXx said on Thursday 15th of September...

It's very intriguing. Definitely write more!

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