The IDT 2 votes Featured in Fantasy, Thriller genre. 2 vote up
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001_moment Frantastic said on Friday 23rd of September...

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I love the twist!!! One thing I would say is you could give more detail to a few things, make it all seem that little bit more rich for the character. I loed reading it though, wondering what was happening, who it was, when it was, all these questions quickly brought to halt. Wonderfully engaging! :)

Insanity xXxBebba0BxXx said on Monday 26th of September...

Good twist, wasn't expecting that!

161020115900 TheSiddhartha said on Wednesday 28th of September...

Thanx. Glad you liked it. :)

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