The Youth Supremacy 3 votes Featured in Crime genre. 3 vote up
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Web Web DSC01773 starcitywriter said on Wednesday 29th of October...

Some words missing. Could use discription of the surroundings. "You read the anything in the paper" - don't understand. But the story is good - just add some discriptions of the people and their suroundings along with word corrections.

Albert Einstein lilyb4u2000 said on Wednesday 5th of November...

somehow, seems that story cud have been better, dont misunderstand, i liked the piece.......just thinking it can turn out better with 1-2 more careful edits....... and wud love ur comments on my literature......thanks

Images2 Mr pen said on Sunday 31st of May...

really u should get a thumbs up on this story man u deserve it i lovedit and plz give me some pointers to my stories cause i can learn from u

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