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ThDarkshadow_wolf Dark_She_Wolf

said on Monday 31st of May...

It’s a good story I spotted more then a few errs, but nothing that cant be easily straitened up. How ever the statement about the Teddy Bear Doesnt fit simply because it is historically incorrect. There was no such thing as a Teddy Bear before the 1900s and it gets its name from the US President Theodore Roosevelt. So instead perhaps you should say Stuffed Baer instead? Its just a thought. A tad more research might give your story a more realistic feel? Anyways its a good story

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