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001_moment Frantastic said on Wednesday 22nd of December...

so short but has so much in it! Great way to lure in a reader, you continue to be far too good! :)

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Sunday 26th of December...

I can honestly say I know the truth behind your word all to well, no mater what is decided by the courts, what has been done can not be undone, and the scares still romaine.

Z138767739_thumb lovetowrite said on Monday 14th of February...

Thanks for the comments. I was trying the 147 word story thing.

Prototypesmall weirdfishdf said on Friday 3rd of June...

Wow, very nice, the way you build up hope only to tear it down at the end is very well done, especially in such a short piece

Life of Shawn&Celia 525 Shawn said on Sunday 31st of July...

Very nice, this is indeed short, however it has a lot of punch. Thank you for this post.

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