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001_moment Frantastic said on Friday 4th of February...

I like how it's made of a conversation, though couldn't quite get the rythym of it, then again is that on purpose considering the topic? It's good though, a good way to round off with the way you repeat the first line :)

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Saturday 5th of February...

Good, though I think it needs more then one reading to really get the feel of it. I agree with Frantastic, I like the repeat of the first line.

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