What would you do? (Choose your own Adventure) 4 votes Featured in Fantasy genre. 4 vote up
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Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Wednesday 5th of January...

This reminds me of the "Endless Quest" books I read as a kid. The story is simple but good. But your story needs more depth. Add a bit more meat to that bone you’ve tossed. Well Done. ^_^

Toimu Toimu said on Wednesday 5th of January...

Thanks, right now it is a Flash Fiction, but I might beef it up into a short story.

Dark (49) Dark_She_Wolf said on Wednesday 5th of January...

Your welcome, I am intrigued by the idea, and I think your story has a lot of potential. But in the end the story is yours and you should do with it what you will, but it would be a shame to see it end so soon.

001_moment Frantastic said on Sunday 9th of January...

I'd agree, keep this going, I used to love these kind of books, never the same story twice!

Jr_studios_sandiego JR Studios SD said on Saturday 15th of January...

Wow that was brief. Interesting though. Try adding a jump to section after each option instead of just scrolling down looking for what section matches what you aswered.

User JIrvin5 said on Monday 2nd of January...

I love these types of stories

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